Monday, April 28

Day of My Death

When i got up in the morning,
There was no sunrise...
There was no Sun,
There was no sunshine...
Dark Clouds, Sorrounding the earth,
Lightning & Thunderstorms shouting a lot...
I felt like dreaming,
So closed my eyes...
Pinched myself,
twice n thrice...
but this is 2030,
the day of my death...
when i met God,
then i realised...

47 comments:

Pri said...

is this an old poem of urs??
i think ive read it before on your blog...

but still goes to say its beautiful :)

Chakoli said...

Wow.... u write beautifuuly :-)))


has such a deep menaing...but so simply u have conveyed:_)))

good one:-))

Sweetstickychewy said...

Loved the emotions that surrounds the poem.

Beautiful writing Ankur!

Cheeries!:D

Cinderella. said...

THis poem haunts me man !

It aint scary, but just tha, the end of everything is perhaps the only certainty in this world, and that, is such a haunting thought.

You conjured it up well.

Pri said...

@ ankur
btw did u use 'deathclock.com' to get that 2030 date??? :-/

Ashu said...

dark post!!! scary he mere liye!!

Ankur said...

@Pri

observant ... :D :D
yes.. but it was posted a long time back and as of now i m not able to write much... so :D :D

**but still goes to say its beautiful :)

thanks a lot :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Chakoli

**Wow.... u write beautifuuly :-)))

thanks chakoli..
but i still hold the opinion u r better :)

**has such a deep menaing...but so simply u have conveyed:_)))

hope this doesnt come true :)
Amen!!!

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Sweetstickychewy

yeah.. there are a lot many sourroundin, this is wat i m most afraid of actually, not abt me but abt wats happening wit earth :)

thnxx...
Cheers!!!!

Ankur said...

@Cinderella

**THis poem haunts me man !

well cindy, it haunts me too... *sigh

*the end of everything is perhaps the only certainty in this world

ya i guess, but i really wish it doesnt end in this way... where nature punishes us for everthing we r doing.. :-/

**You conjured it up well.

thanks :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Pri said...

**btw did u use 'deathclock.com' to get that 2030 date??? :-/

haha... no ways... i have seen that site.. but dont beieve on it much... hopefully!!!

but u kno wat.. i will turn 50 this year... and i dont think i wud be able to do much at tat time... so its better to leave the world... :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Ashu said...

**dark post!!! scary he mere liye!!

not really dark i must say... but ya scary... n its just the prelude :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Pri

and u know wat.. i just checked mine on deathclock.com... it shows 2027 only... so m not gonna live till 2030 even... :P :P

i m happy :D :D

Cheers!!

vEENs said...

wow!!

End is the only reality that HAUNTS ME!

beautifuulllyyyy written Ankur!!!

aneri_masi said...

ankur, uth, jinda hai abhi tu :p

Sorry, I liked the poem, but can't think of any poetic response :)

Vandita said...

really nice but it leaves me wanting more...
plz aage likh na

Cinderella. said...

I checked deathclock too. Shucks !

Showed Sept 4th, 2059.

So, now should I be happy or sad ?

Keshi said...

realised what? That ur dead?

Well If God existed, why do we hv to die to realise we r dead? :) I mean, I die a million times a day anyways.

Keshi.

Ankur said...

@veens

thnxxx :)

well, its just not u then, it haunts us :)

Keep Smiling...
cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@aneri_masi

heehe... jinda hoon main... e jindagi... gaan yaad aa gaya mujhe :P :P

hehee... dont worry, aapne kaha acha hai, bahut hai..

i have yet to read the pancake thing, but when will i get to eat it i m wondering :D :D

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@vandita

hehe, even i was thinking ki aage aur bhi, so guess will write more char laina... :D :D

thnxxx for dropping by and catching up with all my posts :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@cinderella

wat r u tellin me... u too..

u shld be happy, u have one to take care to and u to take care off...
cheer up girlie... :D :D

u r gonna live long ;)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Keshi

yes, that i m dead...

and its not just u who finds herself dying a million times each day... u r no exception keshigirl...

but i really m amazed tat how much pain u have inside there in ur heart... i wonder if someday i can of some use to reduce tat pain and bring some real happiness. I know u will say, tat u dont want anyone to make u feel happy or ask u to be happy, but its for me i m asking... :-/

u know when i read ur painful posts i feel so bad deep inside, not pitying certainly, but i have this scary feeling of wat u must be going through... how much u have lost showing ppl how much u r gaining... u still have a heart of a tigeress to live, i m agreeing to it...

keshigirl... this world can never let us live the way we want to, but then we have to find our own ways to be happy in the middle, not feeling lost somewhere by the tantrums thrown at us...

i hope u dont get me wrong with any of this, and i stand by u... just call me whenever u need a friend, i will be there, not asking for anything in return coz i will get the pleasure of seeing u happy dear friend :)

Keep Smiling...
Cheers!!

SambY said...

good poem... i am not a big fan of poetry..but this was good...short clean and precise !!

Cinderella. said...

Yeah, pri's comment about it made me go and check it out...

But I'd kinda forgoten about it later yesterday. Log kaha kaha se yeh sab raddii sites banate hain yaar !

And we too inquinsitive cats ! Go to the damned sies and make them earn money...shucks !!

Tumharawala date toh ekadm lochha lagta hai. Rubbish ! I wish we never came across that site. Creepy ppl on earth man !

crasiezt said...

Death and all eh??

Satish Bolla said...

well, all i say is enjoy the coming 22 yrs to ur fullest. lucky u, u know when u die.... ;)

Keshi said...

awww tnxx Ankur ur a darling!

I know that we all die a million deaths every single day..but yeah, what really matters is that we r reborn from each of those painful experiences.

*HUGZ*

Keshi.

Macadamia The Nut said...

Oddly enough that sounds exciting. Finally, the D day! :D

very well written AnkurJi

ceedy said...

Tag executed - 30 questions - hajri de di koni - ab makadma lado mare vaste....

Ankur said...

@Samby

Thnx bro...
i m already missin u yaar... when will u come online now???

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Cinderella. said...

hehe... cudnt control .. is it ;)

but acha hai na tereliye ... its gud.. :)

and in my case no locha re... who want to live after turning 50... i guess it will be better to leave the ppl arnd here to live their lives without me... :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@crasiezt

haan ji
Death and all... kyon acha nahi hai kya??


Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Satish Bolla

**well, all i say is enjoy the coming 22 yrs to ur fullest. lucky u, u know when u die.... ;)

i m gonna enjoy buddy... have few unfinished, un achieved dreams yet, a lot to do... so will enjoy my journey :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Keshi said...

**I know that we all die a million deaths every single day..but yeah, what really matters is that we r reborn from each of those painful experiences.

precisely my point... i can see atleast a glitter of hope in ur eyes n smile on ur face :D :D

**HUGZ**
Cheers!!

Ankur said...

@Macadamia The Nut said...

thnxxx.. yes odd but the very truth :)

Thnx for dropping by :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Ceedy

bhai.. check karta hoon.. par meri poem par koi comment nahi :-/

Cheers!!!

ceedy said...

bus only 50 - jaldi katne ka irada hai kya....

well written - but yeh to indian booking system hai - to tariq to aage badhegi....

and who will give me movie reviews...oye teri ghadi thik nahi hai

and which comment ???

btw started to play cricket again here after a long spell...so the body is aching - for me 2030 seems preety accurate :)

Ankur said...

@Ceedy

haan bhai... 50 bas bahut hua, the way this world is changing, i dont think i can (dont want to) live for tat long!!! *sigh*

hehe... nahi, mera indian bookin system bada precise sa hai :D :D

chinta mat karo, aapko saare movie reviews dekar jaoonga... :D :D

issi comment ki baat kar raha tha *sigh* itni late aya *sigh*

kewl yaar, nahi... ab aap cricket khel rahe ho na.. so this will increase by atleast a yr everyday ;) ;)

so more u play more u gonna live :D :D
wish u live long
Amen!!!

Cheers!!!

Chakoli said...

Ahhh.....
nopes u r better...I know:-)0
and I dont want further debate on this;-)))

crasiezt said...

Arre ni that's not what I meant...of course it's good. Plus the fact that it is short is all the more gooder:D

Pri said...

@ cindrella and ankur
guys please stop checking deathclock.com...its BS...i dont want to live that long..hmpf!! :-/

@ ankur
heyy u turning 50 this year?? :o
woww no wonder u sound soo mature (at times) :p

Pri said...

@ ankur
ohoh realised my mistake...u said 'this' year..hence the confusion :D

Ankur said...

@Chakoli

if its genuine (:D) then a lot of thanks :) :)

hehe... n we wont further debate on this ;) ;)


Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Crasiezt

hehe... matlab lambe wale bekaar hote hain, eh??? :O :O

:P

hehe, thnx yaa... :)

Cheers!!

Ankur said...

@Pri

its BS and who suggested us??? :O :O

:P

and btw... wat do u mean by 50 this year???

x-(



@Cinderella

look at this girl, pehle toh isne bataya, ab mana kar rahi hai... is it of any use now, main toh jaldi marne wala hoon na mere prediction se bhi :( :(

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Pri

oh u realised ur mistake.. u idiot :-/

this year, ke pass main likha hai 2030.. is it 2030??? ya phir tense bhool gayi hai?? :((

tune mujhe issi year main maar diya pri :((

par koi na... dekhte hain.. jitne accidents ho rahe hain lagta hai woh indication hai iska :P :P

ehehehe

Cheers!!!