thinking someone will help me
a star falling from the sky
giving me everything i wish for!
Am i too confused
thinking wat to do with life
shd i sleep or shld i eat
or i shld say bbye
Am i making friends
or losin them too often
thinkin all this time
that this is all so human
Am i making mistakes
but not knowing them
or is it the feeling of
all the loneliness
i think i need someone
someone looking at me
i think i need someone
someone talking to me
But in this virtual world
ppl are selfish
doin wat they want to
forgettin the rest
i think m obsessed
with ppl arnd me
i think m distressed
with the way they react
i think i have given
too much to ppl i dont know
or may be it was hope
that they r all so human
Dont know wat to do
to live or to die
to go to Himalyas
or some Pub HiFi
but i know i will survive
all of this somehow
i m hoping m gonna win all
all of them one day
I think m gonna live
all for me myself
forgetting wat others
doing with d rest
I challenged myself to write a poem based on hope, cudnt think of better :D
As they say, Chill Madi!!! :PAnd my best friend and my sis tells me, its her who is inspiring me to write, she says, every end has a new beginning :P
"That relation ended giving u're personality a new dimension!!!"
She is true though, may be its all coz of u, my lost world :P
29 comments:
Madi???? which Madi?? am asking this coz m a madi mady mads or wtever u call me to be hehe...
'every end has a new beginning '
So true....:) umeed pe to duniya kayaam hai...hope is what we live on n helps us to get going along with moving further...prolly towards the better things :)
Beautiful attempt n 'hoping' for mosre such in future ;)
Cheers..take care.
-->That relation ended giving you're personality a new dimension!!!
totally true ok?!
i told u .. i totally like this one!
what took u so long to post it :D
Hope is the string that makes us see that there is a next step that we could take...
it makes us fall into unidimensional levels
and brings us back to where our expectation lye!
take care :)
good day!
u know i like the 'afterlude' more than the verse :D
and yaa i couldent agree more...some relations end in a way that u realise u are changed for the better...for good...for ever! :)
**i think i have given
too much to ppl i dont know
or may be it was hope
that they r all so human**
Those lines are for me, really !
I totally identified with that. And this was a good attempt, so you must chill madi da.
you know i believe nothing is virtual unless people lie to you about who they are.. but then they can do it in both worlds - real and virtual...
i loved the poem..good one on hope :)
beautiful.
HOPE is what Im running short of these days..
Keshi.
@Mad_orchid
nahi... i wont add the extra a with you, for u mad is enough... :P
and yes, its hope...
now tat i have learned that everythign happens for good, i have hope...
Thhanks :)
@veens
not totally true, but yes, i hv changed a lot i guess...
i was thinking as per ur suggestion... wer to change, cudnt think of :P
**Hope is the string that makes us see that there is a next step that we could take...
it makes us fall into unidimensional levels
and brings us back to where our expectation lye!
wow, well said Veens!!!
Take Care Buddy,
U rock!!!
@Pri
heeheh... well, there were a lot of other things too in the 'afterlude', but i guess this is wat the crux is, when she said i hv changed, i hv changed in past 4 months...
**some relations end in a way that u realise u are changed for the better...for good...for ever! :)
sometimes one has to, for others...
Take Care
Thnxxx
@Cindrella
**Those lines are for me, really !
heehehe, well if u want me to dedicate, then i do... :)
but isnt tat so true???
when u say i totally identify with it, i guess we all expect so much frm our friends and from others... and sometimes the trust shown by us is not reciprocated in the way it shld be :)
Thnxx
@Lena
** people lie to you about who they are.. but then they can do it in both worlds - real and virtual...
Tats so tru Lena...
It hurts whenever u place some trust in someone and they dont respond!!!
Thnxx
Take Care :)
@Keshi
thnxx mate... but u know yesterday i read in a friends blog, a commentor, he said, "y r u all praising her for this crap, she isnt arudhanti..."
and i dont want you to repeat the mistake by chane ke jhad par chadaofy me... i m no Shakespeare... :D
lol
Take Care mate
and once we stopp running from ourselves, hope will be there for sure :)
thnxx :)
Hope is what keeps us going...thats the MOJO...
You are in midst of confusion as you reminising the past and contemplating the future...forgeting to live in the present ;P
really chill madi!!!!
@ceedy
u r so right bhaiya :D :P
on a serious note, i cant decide where to take it from now!!! :|
and i m beginning to start the enjoyment again i guess!!!
Gud for u ...n me as well..coz i learnt quite a bit frm tht :D glad i did...haa haa no need of the extra 'a' coz...urz truly is forever mad..n tune to badi jaldi mujhe pechaan liya gud nei badiya hai :)
Hey Ankur
Cool poem.. we all thrive on HOPE, that 4letter word that keeps us going...:)
came over from Veens blog~~:D
Reciprocation - Trust - Feelings - Expectations....
Arent these all much too jaded terms in th ecinvinient little world we've built around ourselves...too lazy to try to make things work out..coz that'd require us to go out of our comfort zones...
And we dont wanna do that.So what do we do ? We say..'whatevr' !!
Yeh angrezi bhi kya language hai...kuch bhi ho jaye to which you dint have ansers or solutions or words..just say 'whatevr'...
Ok, that was the off the topic. Dont mind the blabber, wouldja ?
@Cindrella
**Reciprocation - Trust - Feelings - Expectations....Arent these all much too jaded terms in th ecinvinient little world we've built around ourselves...too lazy to try to make things work out..coz that'd require us to go out of our comfort zones...
yes i believe, we cant see ourselves without boundaries, i just said it in my other reply but didnt think of it in this way, may be this is why we say
Moh, Maya and 3 others are the reason we are human... :)
and i do agree with u on english... Sorry n watever... :P
guess its funny!!!
and nothing is a blabber...u know tat :)
Well written, very truthful and someone can relate with in a flash. Nice and creative! Keep it up man! :-)
it seems like you have read my heart. This is exactly how i feel... Nothing more to write, that just sums it up i guess... :)
@maddie
**coz i learnt quite a bit frm tht
gud to know this, learning shld never be stopped
**urz truly is forever mad..
i can see that :D
**tune to badi jaldi mujhe pechaan liya gud nei badiya hai
arre hum woh hai jo lifafa dekhkar khat ka majmu bhap lete hain :D
hehehehe
Enjoy...
Thnxx :)
@Aarti
Thanks for dropping by
yes, its hope which keeps us walking n running... :)
thanks :)
and blogroll u soon :)
@Sarang
thanks man... u know there are few and when they praise i really feel it from inside, and u know u r one of them :)
thanks man... though i know its wasnt that gr8 an effort... :)
Cheers n Take CAre!!
@Praks
i know u feel like this, guess have read this... praks u need to understand tat ppl r such... they dont know u as a person... otherwise they would have knwn tat with tat sweet a face u have a sweeter heart inside...
just be like tat.. ever..
and aunty ke haath ki gunjiyan, maine holi par miss kari :D
:d
aaah!
this was beautiful
in hope we trust :D
@freesherry
thanks
and thanks for dropping by
blogrolling u :)
ive finally reached u... i mean i was goin in my blogroll's order ... abhi all i'll say is that "mez likes" :)
hehee.. u have finally reached me... not to late :P
hehehe
well, gud if u find it like u :)
Cheers!!!
@Vandita
hehee.. u have finally reached me... not to late :P
hehehe
well, gud if u find it like u :)
Cheers!!!
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