Wednesday, March 19

Friendship!! in 55 words

Suresh is very happy!!!

Five years back... Radhika shouted at Suresh... "We are just friends...". He wanted to explain her lot of things but...
In States, Radhika misses someone, his warmth and care, badly...

She called, “I wanna come back for you, just for you…”

5 years, but she realized, Today they are getting married!!!

14 comments:

Ankur said...
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Ankur said...

the challenge was to write a complete story in 55 words ONLY!!

I tried to make some sense out of it... dont know how much i did... do lemme know!!! :)

Pri said...

ahaa!! nice one...really!

i actually counted the words at the end of it...somehow it seemed to make perfect sense and it was tough to believe u covered it all in just 55 words...
well done! :)

vEENs said...

I like happy endings :)

and as Pri did the counting alrady... i wont :P

perfect :D

Ankur said...

@Pri
Thanks thanks.. m feelin flattered.. :D

oh u did count... i was couting it all the way, otherwise i would have taken 500 words to complete this! :P lolzzz

and yes, the task was 55 words, so somewhere i miss to justify my tenses too :P

*well done*... coming from u, its great!!! i wish i can write like u someday. :)

Ankur said...

@veens

So does me veens, and yes i know i couldnt justify it all tat well..

but its just to feel happy about... hehe..

Thanks re... :)

Ankur said...

@veens

and yes, i counted it already... dont worry, its 55 only ;)

*ROFL*

Lena said...

how can someone put everything in just 55 words? Not sure i ever will be able to do so..
you did a wonderful job! :)

Ankur said...

@Lena
You know, when i took the challenge, i too was uncertain whether i will be able to write it, or to do justice with the story, then i thought i should atleast give it a try.

So did I, its just a try. :)

Thanks!!! :)

The 'Mad' Orchid said...

:)

Ankur said...

@Mad_Orchid

:)

Though i did not understand the remark. :P

Vandita said...

thats what is a really sweet happy ending :)

Vandita said...

PS: i liked both the names...

Ankur said...

@Vandita

Sweet & Happy :)

P.S. Yes, they are... really :D