Thursday, July 3

No Title!!!

A Small poem written by me recently...

ये जो एहसास है
वो बहुत खास है
दिल की हर धड़कन पर
अब तुम्हारा नाम है
आंखो में तुम
लबो पर तुम
ख्वाबो में तुम
साँसों में तुम
फिर भी नही जानते है हम
क्या यही प्यार है!!!


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English Translation

This feeling
is something special
on every heart beat
theres ur name
u r in sight
u r in talks
u r in dreams
u r in breath
but i dont know really
Whether this is Love!!!

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This is an old one written by me some time back...

इंसानियत ही है मजहब और है ईमान भी
इंसान भी है तू और है मुस्लमान भी
खु का रंग नही बदलता है मज्हबे पाक से
न ही बदलती है शिक्षा पंडित या इस्लाम से
कुराने पाक हो या गीता सिखाती है सब यही
इंसानियत बड़ी है मजहब और हर इंसान से
मुक्कमल होने की तो बस तासीर होनी चाहिए
इंसान बन गया तो फिर और क्या चाहिए


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English Translation

Humanity is religion and practice
Human you are so are you Muslim
The color of blood doesnt change with religion
neither the education with Pandit or Islam
Quaran or Geeta they preach this
Humanity is greater every religion and individual
U just need the flavor to be complete
If you become a human then wat else u need!!!

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None of these 2 poems here has anything to do with any person living or dead currently...
I dont know how much sense these 2 here will make to you, but then they make a lot of sense to me! :)

Also, Making a lot of mistakes these days while commenting, so forgive me if I dont comment on your blogs for sometime!
I think I am out of my mind these days!!! lolzzz


Have fun.. Cheers!!!

70 comments:

Aa̲yushi said...

Speechless.
I liked the second poem immensely.Good work,buddy!

aneri_masi said...

Now all of this makes a lot of sense :)

Comments mein poetry likh diya karo, then it will all make sense ;)

Ashu said...

english xlation kills the essence of the poem......dont do it. few words in hindi cannot be xlated to english........

Solitaire said...

The second one is awesome!
First one sounds like a combination of a lot many hindi songs/hindi movie titles. ;)

aqua gurl said...

Fantastic!!

Love the hindi versions of both=)

Sach said...

Hey hey who said it doesn't make sense??It surely does!!!

I liked the disclaimer thou...Will steal it up for my upcoming posts(or poems to be specific)

agree to ashu..When we all can read it in hindi, let it be that way only coz only then it's bful!

Btw..The song Aditi rox..hai na???

Sach said...

in btw..no excuses for not commenting!
samjhe??
:x

Vrij said...

I totally agree wid Ashu up there.. dont kill the beauty of the poem by translating into English.

Can we send the second one to our political parties?

Keshi said...

Ankur r ya in luuuurve? ;-)


Humanity is the best religion ever! Nice one there.


Not commenting cos ur out of ur mind? I thought all of us are out of our minds anyways. :)


Keshi.

Ankur said...

@Aayushi

thnxx :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Aneri

thanks for sayin this... :)

hehe, will try to do that, may be this will work!!! :D

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Ashu

there are friends who cant read in hindi!! :)
for them... anything!! :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Solitaire

thnxx for the second!!
and for 1st... hehe.. ok!! :D

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Aqua gurl

thanks :)

Cheers!!!!

Ankur said...

@Sach

thnx for liking it :)

u can take the disclaimer!! :P

there r few frnds who cant read Hindi... :)

oh yes... big time... i listen to it all the time!!! :D

Cheers!!!!

Ankur said...

@Sach

ok ok... :D
as aneri said, will try to comment in "song"ular form!!! :P

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Vrij

Vrij, friends are there yaar!! :)

oh y not, i would love to... would love to tell them that there is nothing above and greater than humanity!! :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Keshi

Keshi, who knows if i m ;)

thnxx keshi, nothin can be greater than humanity in this world!! :)

hehe.. ya outta our minds!!!
lolzzz

Cheers!!!

उन्मुक्त said...

हां, यही प्यार है और मजहब तो है वह आचरण —
जो आप अपने लियें चाहें, दूसरे से; या
आप लें, अपने ईमान से।

अच्छी कवितायें है। आप तो बहुत अच्छी हिन्दी लिख लेते हैं। हिन्दी में और कुछ क्यों नहीं लिखते।

Ankur said...

@उन्मुक्त

बहुत कुछ लिखा है हिन्दी मे, खोजिये आपको मिल जाएगा मेरे ब्लॉग पर |
मेरे ब्लॉग पढने और कविता पर टिप्पणी के लिए धन्यवाद |

अंकुर

Lena said...

thanks for english translation :)
second one is really beautiful and very meaningful, must be really amazing in hindi though :)

gunj said...

d 1st poem was wonderful!!

Cinderella. said...

YOu knw how much I like second one , dontha ?!!

It just rox buddy. Very deep and very subtle. One that makes you sit back and re-think, re-wind, re-furnish....

And pehla wala bhi, damn cute ! Loved your concluding line !!!!

Nitin said...

Second one is too gud.. words.. selection are superb

Ankur said...

@Lena

they will keep gettin translating :)
u r welcome! :)

I hope so, yeah meaning is wat i found is good!! :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Gunj

thanks a lot... u r d first 1 to say that... i m happy :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Ella

yes buddy, i know u really liked the second one!! :)

thnxx a lot for those kind words!! :)

hehe.. cute.. thnxx!! :D

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Nitin

thnxxx buddy!! :)
thnx for droping by! :)

Cheers!!!

Princess Mia said...

Wow......tume poet bhi ho....wah wah

Ashu said...

jinhe hindi nahi aati, wo seekhe pahle, par in shabdo ki maaya ka haran mat karo bandhu angrezi me anuvaad karke :)

Anjuli said...

kya baat! poem shoem!

Cinder-Single said...

Ankur, The First poem speaks Volumes!!!

I Like it! Thank you for breaking it down in English Translation for me, Since I cannot read hindi!!hahaha!

Have a great day!

Ne

Ria said...

Wow!u write well buddy...really liked it! :)

Sach said...

@ankur
thanks for the disclamer thing
n for comments jaise bhi hoon..bas Dil Se hone chahiye :D

Ankur said...

@Anvita

hehe.. haan yaar!!! :D

didnt u read ne of my earlier ones???

:O

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Ashu

aisa nahi hai... mujhe pata hai ki anuvad karne se shabdo ki maya gum ho jati hai!!!

par!!!! :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Anjuli

haan ji.. poem shoem!! :D
hehe

ab gaane hum kiske liye gaaye ;)
:D

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Cinder-single

thanks... :)
we will keep it translating for friends!! !:)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Ria

Thanks a lot!! :)
m happy u liked it!

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Sach

hehe.. mai bine dil ke comment likh hi nahi sakta hoon... tabhi toh itne bade hote hai!!! :D

Cheers!!!

yaeecks veens is here said...

I like both of em!

2nd one is real good :)

Ankur said...

@Veens

thanks veensie!!! :D
u made me happy again!! :D

Cheers!!!

carolinagal said...

Pretty :)

prajyot said...

amazing ankut...all make sense...liked them very much

Ankur said...

@Carolinagal

thanks a lot!! :)

Cheers!!!!

Ankur said...

@Prajyot

its Ankur sir!! :)

thanks a lot for sayin tat and droppping by!! :)

Cheers!!!

ceedy said...

मुक्कमल होने की तो बस तासीर होनी चाहिए
इंसान बन गया तो फिर और क्या चाहिए


Do cup chai :P

How are you bud...got limited access and was glad to read these...the second one is awesome....

now I feel so good

when i spell it in english - इंसान is INSANE....and when I am that - aur kya chayeye :)

Ankur said...

@Ceedy

2 cup chai kyon... plural ki baat hi nahi ho rahi hai!! :P
hehe

i m gud, a lil ;)
acha hai.. toh kisi ka wifi mar hi liya :D
mera wifi encrypted hai, koi chori nahi kar sakta hai!! :D

thanks for sayin this... coming from u is a real compliment!! :)

btw... INSANE ban gaya toh seriously kuch nahi chaiye aur!! :)

Cheers!!

ceedy said...

First off you are tagged..

aur INSANE ban gaye to kya one cant have tukaptis???

Keshi said...

I so lost my mind on the day I grew up. :)

Keshi.

Keshi said...

btw Ankur, u dunno to count LOL! Cos u appeared 4 times in my current post, not 3!

Keshi.

Ankur said...

@Ceedy

bhai, thanks a lot for taggin me.. will do it soon!! :D

Tukaptis???? yeh kya bala hai??? :O

Ankur said...

@Keshi

hehe.. really :P
i dont think u ever lost ur mind!! ;)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Keshi

sorry keshi... i counted twice and i was like.. awww.. just 3.. .but i m happy now!! :D

thanks a lot!! :D

Chakoli said...

Ohhh...
I missed these:(((

So sorry...I m late....:))

written superbly...

hw do u mangae to come up with english and hindi simultaneously....

damn good:))

Cinderella. said...

Oye..update nahi karni kya ?!!

Ashu said...

update karis!!!

Keshi said...

:)

come, I hv replied to u in my blog.

Keshi.

Keshi said...

came to check on Ankur...hmmm seems like he's having his brekky..

tata!

Keshi.

Cinderella. said...

Hey I saw Jaanu tu ya today...loved it !!!


have you seen it or not...?!!

Ankur said...

@Ella

nahi yaar nahi dekhi!!! :(

kal parso mai dekhni hai :(
even i wanna watch it bigtime!!

Ankur said...

@Chakoli

yes u r late!! :D

thanks a lot!!!
but u write better!! ;)
hehe...

arre its just d translation, nothing great!!!
:)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Ella

update aaj!!

ceedy said...

@cinderella and ankur

you know why he has not seen the movie yet????

cause ankur cant dance sala :)))

Ankur said...

@Ella

update aaj!!

Ankur said...

@Keshi

ihave seen the reply keshigirl!! :D

Ankur said...

@Keshi


ya.. have checked, but u know sometimes its difficult to understand that we cant run away from everything!!! :)

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

@Ceedy

sahi kaha bhai..

Ankur cant dance saala!!! :D

hehe

Vandita said...

i liked both but the second one was just amazing ... loved the last line "insaan ban gaya toh phir aur kya chahiye"

Ankur said...

@Vandita

thanks a lot! :)

Cheers!!