water comes down
still from the eye
thinking or wandering
of all that "high"
the love the pain
it still remains
walking slowly
down that lane
looking at the moon
which bright the sky
oh lord i wonder
when shall I
the darkness in heart
breath thats still apart
in the cage that lights
it holds the life
its full moon's night
which makes me remind
the girl i loved
and when it rhymed
its all not end
but i still rewind
to play it again
with script all mine
the happy notes
camera and light
singing and cheering
chorus and chimes...
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20 comments:
maybe sometimes we should stop rewinding and rather start forwarding and make new happy notes.
And then the darkness will disappear :P
Dont tell me easier said than done :D
But it is always worth a try and then we will read another masterpiece but more happier one :)
The best is yet to come.
nice
beautiful...
I totally second Lena buddy !
Look forward...walk ahead...
ahem ahem ;) you are the greatest poet of bloggerville!!
:D
:D
the poem touched a chord in my heart. very poignant, yet beautiful.
its full moon's night
which makes me remind
the girl i loved
and when it rhymed......... i find these lines the most beautiful.
keep writing... :)
take care :)
Beautiful poem.
Very sweet Lyric with hummable tune.
Keep writitnng.
Its ok to look back, cry a lil if u must and remember the good times that arent here anymore. But always look on the bight side of life...u r who u r today cos of all the painful past...and u hv a beautiful PRESENT called TODAY. So smile and be happy Ankur.
*HUGZ*
Keshi.
Ahead shalt you go when the past shall be put on a pause! :)
I agree with Sneha..the best IS yet to come.
nice one...:)
arrey wah koi poetry bhi karta hai! :)
Looking back is something that one has to do sometimes... we just have to make sure we all know that looking forward is going to bring us new Joys and songs!!
The many tears that I have cried, have turned in to happy tears, that is now the memories of my life I look back on and say wow Nehya Look how far you have come... So I know what lies infront of me is ENDLESS!
This is a great Post!!!
Ne.
hey where hav u disappeared!? My blog and me r missin ur presence. :(
Ria hey, Ankur doesnt visit some of us anymore...mebbe he got bored with us hehehe...
Ankur Im not forcing u to visit my online home ok . Im making tea for the 100s of visitors so far, but the door is open for u too...as usual.
Take it easy. ;-)
Keshi.
And poetry too?
:D NICE!
@Lena
hehe.. thats what i always say no!! :P
i will try!! :)
Thnx for being there...
Cheers!!
@Sneha
Thnxx!! :)
Cheers!!
@Veens
:)
Cheers!!!
@Swati
Thnxx :)
Cheers!!!
@Ella
I am already!! !:)
Cheers!!
@Div
heheh.. i know abt this story!! :P
Cheers!!
@Preetilata
Thnxx... :)
Cheers!!!
@Ria
Thnxx :)
Cheers!!!
@Keshi
thanks for those kind words... it made me feel good when i read those!! :)
Cheers!! !
@Crystal
i will...
Cheers!!!
@Jagjit
Thnxx :)
thnx for dropping by...
Cheers!!
@Anjuli
haan!! :D
Cheers!!
@Nehya
i think u described it for me... thanks a lot!! :)
Cheers!!
@Ria
I am here, and sorry for not making to ur blog sweetie, but i m there...
and i will be... :)
Cheers!! !
@Keshi
Dumbo, i will keep reading u swetie, just that i wasnt feel like dropping a comment, but u can always find my footmarks there... :)
and dont worry, i dont visit u coz u force, i visit u coz i like to read u... :)
Cheers!!!
@MAcadamia the nut
yes nuttie!! :D :D
hehe
thnxxx :)
Cheers!!!
Im not forcing u to read me Ankur...just that when u read and dun say HI, how wud I know if ur visiting me or not? Im being honest here. :) I like my friends to be in touch with me...and in the blogworld, the only way I'd know that is if I see a HI from them in my blog.
but nah, I aint expecting anything from anyone anymore. :) Its a fact, believe me.
Keshi.
cute..
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